I really want this to work for me because I very much like the captured moment – it's fabulous! The toning is also great. But somehow the picture doesn't make a whole for me. If the train were on the near platform (so it felt connected with the man) it would work better for me; or if the open expanse were in front of him; or if we couldn't see the end of the carriage (so it would drop more into the backgound) …
I really want this to work for me because I very much like the captured moment – it's fabulous! The toning is also great. But somehow the picture doesn't make a whole for me. If the train were on the near platform (so it felt connected with the man) it would work better for me; or if the open expanse were in front of him; or if we couldn't see the end of the carriage (so it would drop more into the backgound) …
I know, I know… ;-) (it was shot from inside another train – no time, no place for maneuvers, I simply failed about composition :-/ )
I suspected something of the sort. Oh well, I'll just keep enjoying it as it is. Did I mention the lighting on his face? Good stuff.
to co mi się podoba w tym zdjęciu to to, że łamie podstawowe zasady kompozycji.
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